Can you proofread my introduction paragraph?

hmm it's really good! just make sure you don't have any tense changes. my teachers always get on to me about that. like in your first sentence, you could change "had been ruling" to just ruled. so you could just take out the "had been" and change "ruling" to "ruled". i'm trying to think of how you could change the last sentence's verb, but i can't figure out how to rearrange. but you want to stick with the same tense. oh you could say "Queen Elizabeth’s revealed her intentions throughout her powerful speech that was embellished with metaphors, imagery, unusual diction, and notable sentence structure."